HEARTBREAK

“We need to talk”
“I know”

Breaking; A single crack

“We’re falling apart”
“I know”

Breaking; being pulled apart

“So.. what now?”
“I don’t know”

Breaking; but now brimming with pulsating anger

“Does this mean we should give up?”
“I really don’t know”

Breaking, apparently alone

“You should really say something more.”
“I know, but I have nothing”

Breaking, held together by a single thread

“I think there’s only one thing we can do”
“I know… I kinda hate it”

Breaking, but not so alone anymore

“So, this is it? We’re done?”
“I guess so”

Breaking, almost pulled apart

“I really loved you”
“I know”

Breaking, its nearly done

“You never loved me, though”
“I know”

Broken. Shattered. But free

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10 Comments Add yours

    1. Rev says:

      Thank you. I’ll be sure to watch the video and leave my thoughts 🙂

      Like

  1. watttbox says:

    Ahh, I love to love a heartbreak story.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rev says:

      True though 💗

      Like

  2. Very straight to the point, I like it. You conveyed the point behind this dialogue well.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rev says:

      Thank you so much 🙂

      Like

  3. zeckrombryan says:

    well paced. Really like how this is like a barrage of mood punches ending with a coup de grace. Nice one.

    Liked by 1 person

    1. Rev says:

      Haha thanks I’m glad you enjoyed it

      Liked by 1 person

  4. Ebe says:

    Wtf you depressing child

    Liked by 2 people

    1. Rev says:

      I’m in a mooood

      Liked by 1 person

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